Moriah Leila

Genre: Other Fiction Link: Whenever you have time I'd appreciate your input. You've helped me on other reviews and they really helped. As always I will review any work that ...

Title: Untitled Chapter One (I need help on this, so if you have any suggestions) Genre: Other Fiction Link: I would really like an in-depth review, grammar, puncuation, flow, character ...

I know you wanted a review from me, but it's hard for me to critique your work. I really enjoyed reading this piece. I liked the pov and tone of ...

Okay, so I don't have too much to add to what has already been said. I'd like to suggest you do spell check everything before you post it, because most ...

Sorry it took me so long to get back to you with this review. I have a few nitpicks, but most everyone has already covered what I was going to ...

If you don't mind. Oh and I am always willing to return the favor. Thanks!

I really like this piece, I think the plot is terrific. As for critiques I just have some nitpicky stuff. I wish I had known about YWS when I was ...

Rocky Mountain Oysters, they're actually not oysters at all. ~Victoria Montgomery What is your biggest regret and why?

Arthur Simpson sounds like a geeky mailman with a unibrow and lots of freckles. In his mid-thirties and lives with his Grandma who likes to watch Wheel of Fortune. Oh ...

Because they have hairy legs. If vegetable oil is made out of vegetables and peanut oil is made out of peanuts, then what is baby oil made of?

Taco Bell is really Mexican dog food. At least that's what I've heard..... What would you do if your parents told you that the whole family was going to join ...

Apple Juice

PLEASE give me SOMETHING to review! I'm desperate! If you need a review feel free to post your link below. Here is what I will NOT review: No fanfic, lyrics, ...

I'm not sure if you are still doing reviews but if you are I'd love for you to take a look at my latest story. As always I will return ...

Okay, so to be honest, your story moves so quickly, changes perspective so rapidly, and leaves so many questions at the end that it is very hard to comprehend what ...